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In today's society, one will be paid more if their job is more economically important. However, teaching is one of the most economically important occupations because our future economy relies on the education of its youth, yet teachers are paid much less than the average professional athlete. A player who runs and catches footballs get million dollar contracts. A Surgeon or Doctor who repairs a brain, heart, or limbs, and saves people’s lives every day, doesn't even get close to that amount of money. Would you rather have live sport entertainment or be educated, healthy and safe? An athlete plays a few games, run a few laps or hit a few balls and there is a lot of training involved but this is nothing compared to other very determined people in our world today who strive for other careers that may involve studying for numbers of years and there are also people out there struggling such as a mother who works two jobs just to provide a healthy, stable and safe life for her two children? She cleans 14 houses and works two shifts at her job, but still gets paid not even a sixteenth of what an athlete gets and she puts in much more effort.